show don't tell landmark

I walk through the gates of the magical land and get a whiff of all the sensational food stands. All I can hear is kids screaming and cameras clicking. I think in my mind what ride should I go on first there’s too many to choose from. Finally, I decided I’m going to go on the beautiful Ferris wheel just to start with, I rushed over to the big line of people. Is this really worth it just to go on the Ferris wheel I thought to myself. I decided to just to go get some delicious food which would be more worth it then I’ll go on Pirates of the Caribbean. I took a bit out of my chocolatey, sensational mickey bar. I scoffed it up like I was a pig then raced over to the noisy pirates of the Caribbean line, I got on the hard warm seat and ahh woosh creak went the ride as it wooshed out of sight,I got off the ride terrified and decided to just take it easy and go on it’s a small world.